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June 19th, 2003, 06:37 AM
#1
Cyalaytr
Guest
?Your Ring?
The gold that wrapped your finger
Was never as tight as
My arms about you
And the diamond
That shined so bright
Could never compare
With the light that filled my heart
But the ring did stand for something
My unending love for you
For as long as you wore it
We would be one
But then again
Some things are easier
Said than done.
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June 19th, 2003, 09:11 PM
#2
Senior Hostboard Member
Solid ending.
Actually, then ending hit my like a rock to the temple. I was like... "woa.... creepy".... hehehe.... nice one.
I liked it!
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June 22nd, 2003, 07:16 PM
#3
HB Forum Owner
aye.
it really cut to the chase, cya....
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