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    Cyalaytr
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    ?Your Ring?

    The gold that wrapped your finger

    Was never as tight as

    My arms about you

    And the diamond

    That shined so bright

    Could never compare

    With the light that filled my heart

    But the ring did stand for something

    My unending love for you

    For as long as you wore it

    We would be one

    But then again

    Some things are easier

    Said than done.

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    Solid ending.
    Actually, then ending hit my like a rock to the temple. I was like... "woa.... creepy".... hehehe.... nice one.
    I liked it!

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    aye.

    it really cut to the chase, cya....

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